love the fluff. Nice moments!

Love KiritoxAsuna. Love this fic! Good work :)

This was so cute! Nice work! :D

I really enjoyed this.

Fluff. So much fluff. This is good for your health.

Well, well, I love how it demonstrates how you can snatch victory from jaws of defeat by utilising the terrain and the opponent's weakness.

It looks like Asuna's teddy bear has been forgotten as it silently oversees their doings, from the pillowfight, the tickle, until they wakes up again. But I digress.

It's quite ironic that the infamous Lightning Flash is afraid of her namesake, no? XD

As of those 'Kirito-kun' all over their encounter, let's just say it was his pet name, 'kay?

Why are you apologizing for the fluff? It's only fluffy as far as plot advancement in SAO canon goes. Your writing itself is clear and concise, detailed but not overdone, sweet but not intoxicating.

It is exactly what your readers are looking for. This is really one of the most heartfelt things I've read - you gave us a little glimpse into the lives of these two characters, an escape to a perfect love. Even if it's for just ten thousand words, we get to indulge in our imaginations and spend some time with the characters we've fallen in love with.

We all thank you for that. ]

This is really dang sweet. And I mean, really sweet. 5/5

Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up with the great work!

ITS SOOOOO CUTE AND FLUFFY!

Loving the fluffiness

Heehee, it's so cute! I love stories like this! Update soon please:D

I kept expecting Asuna's parents to come back early, haha.

im speechless.. coz of AWESOMENESS

Cute story, I like it, wish it was longer though :P