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   MorganPines8998 3/27/13 . chapter 2Please... Please tell me you're doing more. I love this so much. OH THE MUSHY FEELS MAKE ME SO HAPPY. ...Not that i'd ever say that out loud of course... hah hah... AAANNYYYWWAAAAYY... UPDATE? :D |
| Merino 3/8/13 . chapter 1 I read in your profile that you may not update this since you aren't sure where to take it. But I really hope you continue with it. Your writing of the romantic scenes literally gave me goosebumps. I hope you find the inspiration you need. Based on what I've read so far, I have faith that you could pull off a beautiful and romantic proposal scene like none we've ever read. |
| Sweettea8 3/3/13 . chapter 2 Ok, so I am reviewing again just to prove that I am gonna keep my promise to review every time you update this beautiful gem of a story. |
| Sweettea8 3/3/13 . chapter 1 In your A/N you say this is a 'cute little story' and I'd have to disagree with you. This is one of the most romantic hiccstrid stories I've read in a while. I especially love the scene where they are having the private moment after the mud fight. Such tenderness. Oh, to be sixteen and in love! Please please write more. I'll promise to review! |
| kat404 3/2/13 . chapter 2 So cute! I adore it! Write more quickly! |
| the end of every thing 3/2/13 . chapter 2 Erm... Wasn't there a chapter three for this story and please update soon I really like this story |
| kat404 11/14/12 . chapter 3 Please write more! Love it! |
| VincentNguyen1 10/16/12 . chapter 1 Update soon! I just love how you protrayed Hiccup and Astrid's relationship. |
| Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 3 More |
| Guest 10/6/12 . chapter 3 Please continue not only to update this but to update your other story to! You are very good and I love them both! Please update. Until then peace out! |
| Guest 10/4/12 . chapter 3 Good story. Please make more. Until the, peace out. |
| Guest 10/2/12 . chapter 3 More please! I love how believably you've written all of them, I can't wait to read more ;) |
| snake screamer 10/3/12 . chapter 3 good story btw i hope you use elements of the newest. It was the Best Episode yet, and definitely the funniest; there were an incredible number of great lines in this one. Favorite moment: (Zippleback blows self up) Stoick: NEXT! Great, believable handling of Stoick and Hiccup's father/son friction. And the Thunderdrums (both of them) are just awesome. |
| Cyclone20 10/3/12 . chapter 3 Great chapter I really like how you show astrid and hiccup as a couple so keep it up and update soon! Cyclone20 |
| VincentNguyen1 10/2/12 . chapter 3 This is a very cute chapter! I just love Hiccups and Astrid's relationship. |
