Cliffie!

Man I wish I could read it all in one sitting. My account got hacked by my mother and now she deleted all my fav stories! I can't even get on it! Don't bother pm she'll get the message. But any who just wanted to let u know you're still my fav author:)

G'ah, BETH! Why?! I loved it just fine.

Wayhoo Morger alive! Thanks for clearing that up. Wow how long was she out and is the baby ok? I hope he/she is. Keep up the great work and can't wait for the net chapter.

Beautiful as always. Wow Beth really was fighting in that scene! Imagine the mood swings.. D:

Thank you, Beth.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! This one was so sweet. Dr. C., you naughty thing you.

Wonder why Story-Beth is starting to glow?

Yay, an update! Glad to know that Beth's Ok and that she and the Doc are back together again. Nice chap, btw.

Mongerrrrrrrrr! I swear if my Gerneral Monger doesn't make it out alive, tears shall be shed. Oh and plus when Dr. C was crying, my eyes were getting all watery. D':

Ooh I hope Monger made it out ok. But who would set fire to their home in the first place? And even more important, I thought their home was in a secret place that even mentioning its name is a federal offence (dodgeing a knock out dart) Hey , I said " secret place" not a specific name cut it out!-to one of Morger's snipers. I am just saying that this looks highly suspicious to me. Of course, it could have been caused by an accident. I don't know I guess I will have to get my answers in the next chapter. Anyway keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens next.

AH OH CRAP! How the hell did we forget the unforgettable Monger?

I hope they can get him out in time. I hope the baby's okay as well!

Gahhhh! Not Monger! Not exactly a monster but one of my favorite humans! I already killed him in my story TIA, and I don't need someone killing him too! Glad to know the monsters are okay. This was a well-written chapter...and keep your promise about the chap or I will send an army of fellow sprites to attack you (if I can find any).

Poor Doc...this story is a first for me. Usually in a fanfic mentioning Dr C's past, the wife either leaves him or is left behind. But there's never been one where she dies. God, that was sad. Great chapter btw.

Cute...guess BOB'S not so innocent now. Beth & Doc are so cute together! Can't wait to read more, keep at it!
PS: The part where BOB gets his little biology lesson, as I'll call it, I could only think of the dad in the Calvin & Hobbes comics. How people go to Sears and get an assembly kit, but how some babies are blue light specials at Kmart (almost as good but a whole lot cheaper).

Ooh I hope Doc can get Beth back to normal. And I can't wait if you plan to make a sequel. I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.

cool, :D, do you have any ideas on susan foot scenes? :)