Interesting. I like Donovan's perspective here, it was well done, and it was funny when John appeared at the end. I'm confused as what you meant by the cabbie's hands were "suspiciously pierced," though.

OMG Please continue this! This is a great fan fic and I look forward to more! XD

I love it and the surprise that is John.

That was great. I love these sort of stories. Sherlock might have been a bit OOC. I can't really see him talking over the phone like that in front of the Yard. of course, he is Sherlock, and he does whatever he wants. And it made the story good, so I can't really complain.

Oh God, this is hilariously funny!

LOL I love fics like these, the ones where Sherlock 'accidentally' show-off his not-so-sociopath aspect of his life to the people around him. As a good man used to say, "You see, but you do not observe".

I think it was obvious enough who the 'girlfriend' is. Didn't get why Mycroft's car show up for him, though. And about the cabbie's hands too, how come they were pierced? Suspicious, suspicious. Would love to see a story on the cabbie and of the Yard meeting him *hint hint* ;)