|Reviews for The Red Scorpion|
| GraceForever 5/12/13 . chapter 13
Hey, so, you should update. PLEASE! Ineed to know what happens to Alex! Please update!
| DoneWithYou 2/15/13 . chapter 13
Think it's been more then a month now, so... IM SPAMMING. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Only just discovered this story and its amazing, if you discontinued it I'd probably CRY- and you care about that because, um, ok, you probably don't. But update!
| Lollypopstar 2/5/13 . chapter 13
I think the book was Scorpia Rising and alex was on that boat in the Nile
Great fanfic _
I really do wonder if K-unit remembers him since they only met for a week
| Izzy-I.R.T 2/3/13 . chapter 13
Okay. I'm a little bit disappointed in this. I know that you wrote the first chapter a while after the rest of this but yeah I would have liked it to have been not that different. I guess I will just have to read it as a whole new story. I just thought that parts of this story was cliched or rushed. I'm pretty sure it's going to be worked on in the rewritten version. So yeah, I won't tell you what I thought was a little odd.
It has been more than a month, I think. So I'm not quite spamming but bribing. I shall give you a review for every new re-written chapter. I hope you change a lot because I loved the first chapter and not so much the rest. Your writing has improved in leaps and bounds in just a short amount of time. Like an odd growth spurt of some kind. Good Job!
I have to say that you should probably also remove things like the author's notes in the middle of a chapter. It looks a little messy and unprofessional. Also things like the two different reactions to one scene. If it's really hard for you to choose one (I hate making decisions too), put the other one in your author's note or something. Also, thinking like the chapter that wasn't really a chapter. And little things like that. Its just my opinion so its totally up to you.
Update re-written soon! However, the bribe only has a 3-4 week standing before it becomes expired! So get it fast before it all runs out! hehehe. Probs will review most of the chapters anyway. But, yeah, I kind of want to get the chapter soon. Next week? Tomorrow? lol. Prob no chance but I can still hope right? hehehe
| Izzy-I.R.T 2/3/13 . chapter 4
Okay, I really like how this is going. Well I liked the first chapter, the re-written version better than the other chapters. So could you please let me know somehow when the next re-written chapter will be out? I want to read it but I don't know if it will show up by the alert.
P.S I'm not a fan of the whole Eagle being hyper thing. It's fine usually but I just sometimes wonder if writers overdo it. He IS a soldier and I find it a little hard to believe that he would be like that. However, that is your choice.
| Shadow Cards 1/26/13 . chapter 13
Did you know that a Romainia village once re-elected their mayor even though he died on Election Day? It is also physically impossible for pigs to look up. :)
| wisdomsdaughteriscrazy 1/23/13 . chapter 13
Fantastic! Keep up the good work and pretty pleeeeaaaseee update?:)
| Guest 1/21/13 . chapter 7
HAHAHA DAVID JONES
... There's no other store like David Jones ...
| Guest 1/21/13 . chapter 1
About the dihydrogen monoxide, it's not just because of the big words, although that certainly helps. I think it's mainly that everyone's so scared of carbon monoxide that anything with 'monoxide' on the end had toxic connotations.
| SeeSea17 1/16/13 . chapter 2
YEAH! UPDATE/EDIT! actually, this is better than the original but the original was still prety freakin good
| Agentwooooooop 1/6/13 . chapter 13
Great! Update please!
| writer2be14 1/1/13 . chapter 1
great! pls continue.
so bloody true! i was told a realy complicated sentance from my sister and i was suckered.
| cskkdm 12/27/12 . chapter 13
I want to know whenthe update is up! I was loving the story and just waiting for K to figure out who Alex was!
| a person 12/27/12 . chapter 1
This is a good prologue! I don't remember the last one word-for-word but I think the new and improved version of this story is going to be good!
Keep up the good work!
| writer2be14 12/24/12 . chapter 13
I think that it was eather a bear or a tiger in rothmans office