Not bad, not bad at all. Off to an excellent start, in fact. And no, your spelling is not so terrible as to be blinding; the most common mistake I see you making is mixing up 'their' and 'they're'. 'Their' is a possessive, "the lamp is theirs", for example, while 'they're' is simply a contraction of 'they are'. "They're over by the lake."

Characterization seems fairly accurate so far. Looking forward to seeing how this story will go. (Don't be surprised if you don't hear from me until the end, though. No doubt you've seen my favs list and my alerts are even longer. Don't have much time to do more than read these days, more's the pity.) Good luck and good writing!

OH NO! Ammy has amnesia! Myra

This is a very interesting idea. Myra

I already like the direction this story is taking, and I really enjoy the set-up for those mini-boss fights. Really grateful for the unique take on different parts of Japanese culture/mythology, and I can't wait to see more!

Interesting!
Update soon!

you got me interested in this stoy just by the preview summery omg u have to continue :3