|Reviews for An Unusual Family|
| UPDATE 4/7/13 . chapter 1
| JazMitch 4/4/13 . chapter 1
Aww, sounds so sweet and awesome. Please continue! Update! Loving the Mel and Joe moments!
| NicoleTheWriter 12/31/12 . chapter 1
It's sweet, except where his mom dies, but please
| sermadrid 12/17/12 . chapter 1
Wow, pls continue. The first chapter is really good.
| Guest 11/1/12 . chapter 1
| Ashley 10/6/12 . chapter 1
| Guest 9/30/12 . chapter 1
| krazypurplewolf 10/1/12 . chapter 1
great story line, did you proofread to make sure it flowed? There was a few spots that could have been different, but other then that you did really good. Look forward to reading the next chapter.
| DeepestBlueOcean 9/29/12 . chapter 1
Very good idea for story,please countinue
| AnnDee 9/26/12 . chapter 1
You need to work on your basic spelling and grammar.
"Mel says happily while walking through the front just got home from work and had a great day." This is not a complete sentence. Try rereading or getting someone to check your work and you may have noticed that, what I assume is, "...door after having..." was missing.
Sadliy is not a word.
""I'm fine."Joe said he was trying to hold together." Is a run-on sentence.
| Guest 9/24/12 . chapter 1
This is GREAT! :D
| BellaItaliana93 9/24/12 . chapter 1
Aww, how sad for Joe!:( This seems like a different story line than most stories written on here, so that's good. Hopefully they all go with Joe to Italy to support him. Keep up the good writing, and hope you can update soon:) Love the story so far!
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 1
Please continue... i love it so far :)
| kelli maguire 9/24/12 . chapter 1
Hey girl. loved it, and totally love the idea. I'm so excited for the next chapter. Plz update asap :)
| asanto481JB 9/24/12 . chapter 1
I like it :) please continue