|Reviews for Caprice|
| BluePhoenix0101 11/10/12 . chapter 8
Ace kissed Marco?! OMG! I so did not see that coming!
Update soon, please.
| Face Paint 11/9/12 . chapter 8
alkdsjfh I can't
I can't wait another week for this, why is this so perfect, oh my god. It's not enough, this is amazing, aldksjfhakdhfaskjfhaskdfh I'm sorry, I promise to put more effort into the next review, you deserve it. OTL
| Eastern Phoenix 11/9/12 . chapter 8
Loving it! Poor Ace (and Marco, but at least he got a painting out of it!) :D Can't wait 'till Kidd comes back, his and Law's interactions are my favorite x)
| writer-xanthangummy 11/9/12 . chapter 8
I never knew washing a wounded, bloody hand could feel so sensual, but you were winning me over there, let alone Ace.
| Tigereye13 11/5/12 . chapter 5
First, some things that you might want to change:
even if they were dear friends who oft(en) exchanged letters.
The docks, Groves 50 through to 59, (You only really need either through or to here.)
After he was finished his shopping (Either "After he finished his shopping" or "After he was finished with his shopping")
wondering if he dared broach his true reason for bring(ing) up the subject.
Well, this was an interesting chapter. Poor Shachi being blamed for something that Zoro did. Ace is starting to make his move on Marco, something that Marco is unaware of. And Law trolling Kidd again, only to get into some trouble while doing so from what it appears.
Why do I think that Kidd being attracted to Law is going to cause trouble. I'll catch up on the rest of it tomorrow.
| Ume 11/5/12 . chapter 7
For me the moment when Ace was drawing Marco is the hottest thing I've ever read about those two. So innocent, yet so erotic. Thank you for this chapter, can't wait to read the next one)
| Nekozm-chan 11/4/12 . chapter 7
One of my favorite storys so far
| Tigereye13 11/4/12 . chapter 4
One thing that you might want to change: "After she sent (a) forth a second letter to prod me into action,
So, Ace has incubus blood running through his veins. That explains his sexual desires. I will give a more in depth review once I have fully caught up. I'll mostly be leaving behind things that really caught my attention. It was a good chapter, and the interactions seem believable as something that could happen.
| Tigereye13 11/4/12 . chapter 3
There was one thing that you might want to change: He kept his eyes on the blanket the(that) pooled around his waist,
I haven't been able to read this due to school work mainly. So, I am finally able to start catching up with Caprice.
So Shachi is a Boggart - that likes to sing and dance I take it, Penguin is a Caladrius, and Bepo is some sort of shape shifter that normally looks like a white bear. I sort of want to say that the bergrisar is Jean Bart. Just what I want to call him. Not sure if that is who it is at this point though.
So, Ace has desires that he needs to keep in check, and probably has some sort of connection to the world of the supernatural.
It is a very interesting chapter and I shall continue to read on now.
| Kol Kol Russia 11/4/12 . chapter 7
DAT FOUNTAIN SCENE. I loved it! Damn, the way eustass acted was scary yet awesome. Agh I am so Enthralled with this fic! I'm aching to find out what eustass is. He has piqued my curiosity. I also am looking forward to the development if Law and Kid's relationship.
The scene with Marco and ace was so cute! Poor ace. All he needs is some Marco lovin' and he'll be better. :) Keep up your enticing work!
| DeidaraUlquiorra 11/4/12 . chapter 7
Bepo makes pretty good excuses , even Traffy can't best him XD
| Guest.124 11/4/12 . chapter 7
The fountain scene is definitely one of my favorites.
| keyofathousandvoices 11/3/12 . chapter 7
Ooohh! I spot the title! xD
This is an amazing story! It's rare to find one so wordy and intricate! It's refreshing, to say the least, and I can't wait to see how their relationships develop. Thank you for writing this! Please update soon 3
| Setari 11/3/12 . chapter 7
I love the fountain scene, too. I think I might have to read the chapter again, though, cause I was so eager to know what happened I skimmed bits XD
Poor Law. I have a feeling Kidd's quite ruined his appetite XD
I'm glad we've finally got a name for what Ace is, though I did suspect XD Looking forward to finding out what, exactly, Kidd is. Being a little hit-and-miss with my knowledge of folklore and mythology, I'm kind of at a loss P
Really looking forward to reading the next chapter! *shuffles to the edge of my seat and stares avidly at my inbox*
| Pookey 11/2/12 . chapter 7
I loved the fountain scene too! That was so much fun to read and I got all excited when it happened lol! but I love how Bepo interacts with Law the most. The end scene with him sniffing Law was adorable!