Loved the ending but confused about the nightmares and Ramona being a bit like young Carrie White

Kathy here, can't be bothered to log in but this is epic :D

Wow! So you actually managed to expand it after all. I still think it finishes to soon but this time it is not hard to guess what becomes of your main characters after they missed a real killer party. Still at the end of the day. Very good