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| Nieriel Raina 2008-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that is gorgeous! A little heavy on the use of adjectives and adverbs, but lovely nonetheless. |
| Celeblass 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was truly beautiful! I'm so glad I found this story tonight, it fit my mood perfectly. I have always loved Finrod and I thank you for the wonderful job you did with him! |
| Thuriniel 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. Your explanation of Finrod's rebirth was so believable, with an incredibly mystical aura to it. Your portrayal of Amarie is so sympathetic and textured. I really appreciated the slight humor to break a bit the gravity of the moment. Your prose borders poetry and makes of this short fic a beautiful jewel. |
| John Black 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. When Iwasread the book by tolkins I felt sorry for finrod soI likeyourfic very much. Very intimet lol well hope you update soon can,t wait to read the next chapter |
| Jillian Baade 2003-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse'If you are willing to walk into the city with a stark naked elf in tow, of course.' Well one way to spread the story that Finrod's back I guess. Wonderful story, very sweet and loving. |
| Lady Peredhel 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was the best short fic I have ever read. The writing was excellent and I'm so happy that Finrod has returned from Mandos into Amarie's arms. ::sighs:: That's excellent stuff :) |
| The Blind Guardian 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! this is beautiful! i loved it! your writing fashion is marvelous! |
| Jen Littlebottom 2003-03-22 ch 1, | abuse*does happy dance* Finrod and Amarie; this is so lovely, well written, beautiful imagery. And, dare I say it, the sexual content, while the R rating is well earned , is tasteful and rather nice :) *resolves to use new word 'alcedine' randomly in conversation - ooh, shiny new word* Jen |
| Kelsey 2002-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood for Finrod! He needed this happy ending. I always felt sorry for Amarie but never gave it too much thought. Beautifully written Alena. |
| Soledad 2002-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sweet. Finally a Silfic with a happy end - not an easy task to perform. I admire your vivd descriptions of Tírion. Great work. |
| Artanis (Can't log in) 2002-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery beautiful and romantic piece. this is so sweet.... *goes back to read again*. |
| kalurien 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, nicely written story, beautiful imagery. *pouts with jealousy* wish I could write all 'Tolkieny' like that. The Blessed Realm must be getting very crowded, what with imortality, reincarnation, everyone coming back from M-e *g* |
| Finch 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseA lovely story! I can ever get enough of Finrod & Amarie, and this is beautifully and subtly done. Only - now I keep imagining what effect it would have on the inhabitants of Tirion, seeing a stark naked Finrod walk the streets. Or do you think all the re-embodied Noldor would return like that? |
| Furius 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseah, happy Finrod. Always thought he deserved this at the end |
| Nemis 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's really your and Finch's fault that I'm beginning to enjoy Finrod and Amarië so much... (Finrod and Amarië are now running away from me, very fast ;)) Anyway, good job (you are fast gaining a fanclub too, if I have anything to do with it). And I still think "alcedine" is a cool word. Might use it. *ponders* |