Good ideas that deserve more words to expand and intensify the feelings of the reader.

You've done a good job of getting all the characters' attitudes and feelings expressed in only a few words.

Leaves a reader looking for a few more details.

Aww... I love the ending. So sweet.

Haha! So sweet I love it... I don't know Cerasi... I'll probably look her up. What wonderful story! Keep it up!

Aaaawwwww so cute... Me like

I'm not familiar with this episode,but the writings very descriptive. The story arc is tight and there is a good message. Loved ones never truly leave you!

Love this! Great job

That was really sweet. Love it!

Very nice.