I love this! Very interesting. You developed your characters very nicely. Great work! I can't wait for further updates. :D

You might want to change the year this is set in. Harrison Ford is 70 yrs old. The charecter of Indiana Jones, however, would be about 58 or 59 yrs old in 1959 assuming that he was about 38 when he left Marion and the Kingdom of the Crystal Sull and his reunion with Marion was in 1957, approximately 20 yrs later.