Har har har! Okay, so I was all like 'You biatch' when it came to the end of Estora's first POV. Then I was like 'You tell that biatch Rory!' and then in Estora's second POV I was like 'Glad some sense entered that blonde head of yours, but I'm still mad at you and Zachary so I hope he has performance issues!'.

And of course, I heart Estral. I was very sad for her when her voice was stolen.

Update soon woman!

OHHHHHHHH :D I love it how Rory is protecting Karigan :D that is the best way for the weapons to act :D
Please write more soooooonnnnnnn! I LOVE THIS STORY!

No confusion with the POVs.

I think you did a great job with estora... She is such a *#&$%! I was glad that Rory stood up to her. And estral's POV was great too. But... I want karigan!

Awww I was hoping for some more Karigan and Fastion but I guess I must wait until next time.

Ah, man, I was hoping for a little more action. I guess every chapter can't be packed with adventure. ;) It was still good. And what is KZ up to? I think he is going to lock Estora in the bedroom! Haha, that really would be great.

0_0 I feel pity for Estora now . . . she isn't such a bad egg. I really liked her POV, where she reined herself in and took a step back to look at the situation. And I was very very happy to see the Weapons protecting their little sister.

On a final note, I hope Zachary has performance issues. There, I said my piece.

Okay, so a wee bit disappointed. But that's because the chapter is over and done when I want more. Although, I do find Zachary's response to Karigan pulling away from him a bit out of character... Still, good chapter. Hope to see an update sooner rather then later.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh! I neeeed to read more! You need to update quicker :D
Great chapter please update soooooon! :P

Amazing, awesome... KEEP WRITING!

Wow, the K/Z stuff is really heart-rending, and you make it all so vivid. Please post more soon so she can get happy again! Only one thing, I think peaked should be spelt piqued. Great stuff :)

Very nice. Although I think how King Zachary told Karigan of his marriage was out of character for him. But still, it flowed nicely. Can't wait for another update. :)

:(

That . . . that . . . callous man! Just a whimsical little, 'Oh, btw she is Queen now?' Is that a sort of childish retort because she is trying to maintain her dignity in his presence?

Bleh! I want to give her a hug and lend my puppy out, that poor darling . . . she really can't catch a break huh?

Zachary! Hateful jerk! And poor Karigan but I bet Fastion sees it *whistles nonchalantly* Can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay, so super interested in how the conversation between Zachary and Karigan is going to go. Hoping for more Fastion and Karigan too... So update update!