|Reviews for Not Broken|
| WikidThoughts 4/9/13 . chapter 7
Har har har! Okay, so I was all like 'You biatch' when it came to the end of Estora's first POV. Then I was like 'You tell that biatch Rory!' and then in Estora's second POV I was like 'Glad some sense entered that blonde head of yours, but I'm still mad at you and Zachary so I hope he has performance issues!'.
And of course, I heart Estral. I was very sad for her when her voice was stolen.
Update soon woman!
| Louisiana Stephenic 4/4/13 . chapter 7
OHHHHHHHH :D I love it how Rory is protecting Karigan :D that is the best way for the weapons to act :D
Please write more soooooonnnnnnn! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| pj 3/27/13 . chapter 7
No confusion with the POVs.
| Aereal 3/26/13 . chapter 7
I think you did a great job with estora... She is such a *#&$%! I was glad that Rory stood up to her. And estral's POV was great too. But... I want karigan!
| emmalilly21 3/26/13 . chapter 7
Awww I was hoping for some more Karigan and Fastion but I guess I must wait until next time.
| Britt32 3/26/13 . chapter 7
Ah, man, I was hoping for a little more action. I guess every chapter can't be packed with adventure. ;) It was still good. And what is KZ up to? I think he is going to lock Estora in the bedroom! Haha, that really would be great.
| Owlkin 3/26/13 . chapter 7
0_0 I feel pity for Estora now . . . she isn't such a bad egg. I really liked her POV, where she reined herself in and took a step back to look at the situation. And I was very very happy to see the Weapons protecting their little sister.
On a final note, I hope Zachary has performance issues. There, I said my piece.
| WikidThoughts 3/18/13 . chapter 6
Okay, so a wee bit disappointed. But that's because the chapter is over and done when I want more. Although, I do find Zachary's response to Karigan pulling away from him a bit out of character... Still, good chapter. Hope to see an update sooner rather then later.
| Louisiana Stephenic 3/18/13 . chapter 6
Ahhhhhhhhhhh! I neeeed to read more! You need to update quicker :D
Great chapter please update soooooon! :P
| sparrow5 3/18/13 . chapter 6
Amazing, awesome... KEEP WRITING!
| Aereal 3/17/13 . chapter 6
Wow, the K/Z stuff is really heart-rending, and you make it all so vivid. Please post more soon so she can get happy again! Only one thing, I think peaked should be spelt piqued. Great stuff :)
| Britt32 3/17/13 . chapter 6
Very nice. Although I think how King Zachary told Karigan of his marriage was out of character for him. But still, it flowed nicely. Can't wait for another update. :)
| Owlkin 3/17/13 . chapter 6
That . . . that . . . callous man! Just a whimsical little, 'Oh, btw she is Queen now?' Is that a sort of childish retort because she is trying to maintain her dignity in his presence?
Bleh! I want to give her a hug and lend my puppy out, that poor darling . . . she really can't catch a break huh?
| emmalilly21 3/17/13 . chapter 6
Zachary! Hateful jerk! And poor Karigan but I bet Fastion sees it *whistles nonchalantly* Can't wait for the next chapter!
| WikidThoughts 3/12/13 . chapter 5
Okay, so super interested in how the conversation between Zachary and Karigan is going to go. Hoping for more Fastion and Karigan too... So update update!