I love it.

I really didn't like this story, but I stuck with it. It reminded me of bloggers post or something. I do hope that you continue to write, though. You had an interesting story, but not the way I would have wrote it. Good job.

I kept meaning to stop and review but somehow kept pressing the next button ... Fabulous story! Brilliant! :)))))))

Great story! I love your use of the diary idea for Anne and the way in which you are gradually revealing the past and her Modern backstory to the reader. One of the best modern adaptations for Persuasion I've read!

Congratulations on completing your story! Happy 2013 to you too

Thank you! I was s glad you updated. And it was very fluffy. :-)
Please, another one soon!

Hello! I started to read this fic today and I must say that I absolutley LOVE IT! Anne is hilarious! And I like her so much in this adaptation. Besides, your writing is fantastic. Seriously, fantastic. I hope to read you soon!

Just read all of this over two days. Persuasion is one of my favorite books and I was really happy to see it set in a modern society.
I think it is very good! I think you've updated Anne's character well. She seems to fit into this modern world.
Great job! And please update more :)

Wow. So hooked on this. I need to know how it ends.
Sidenote/actual review: I really enjoy how this whole story is set up. I love the journal entry style of things. Keep up the great work. Oh, and I love all of the nerdy references. Doctor Who, Harry Potter, Big Bang Theory.. Love it. All I ask is you to finish the story!

NOOOOO! What happens next? Crap..I'm hooked. Need more! Please post soon.

The only thing I can say is that Ava's brothers are older, not younger... but still a nice couple of entries.

Awwweeee! Ugh. I can't wait for her to tell Fred already!

Wow! Go Anne! I like how she seems to really be getting herself together. I'd love to see some dialogue between the characters, but I understand that this is seen through her journal. C'est la vie.

That was a good catch (the 15 month school trip). I just assumed it was like a study-abroad thing. Oh wel...

So far, the first 37 chapters have been really fun to read. Yes, there have been minor grammar or spelling errors; overall, I've enjoyed the read. I haven't really seen a lot of fanfiction for Persuasion out there (which is my favorite Austen book), so this has been a real treat.