Hello there, I just read your *story*. I think

It's a good story, it seemed alittle more then I

can handle. But I read it anyway, but then again

it was alittle digusting! *ew!* Oh well now

I know what to expect from u! But it was still

good I hope to read one of your less gorey one's.

Like I'll find one! Or atleast only find a couple

of ur stories. Lets see :/ I'll read one of ur

Thornberry one's! I'll review to one of ur

Thornberry one's in 1 minute. But one word of

caution to my review I don't make up anything I

write in my reviews, so I really do like this

story it may have been a tad bit long I still

enjoyed it! Bye byez!

Yay, a happy ending! Although I thought for a moment that Shakti would sacrifice herself to protect the Girls and Townsville from Mr. Mime. But I'm glad things turns out all right in the end. _

I was wondering how everything was going to work out OK at the end of all that. Now I know :-D

A very good ending, considering how...short it seemed. I don't think it really was that short though - it certainly didn't feel it when I was finished reading it.

Looking forward to the beginning of the sequel, whenever it starts getting posted up. 'Til then, ciaó!

whew i,m glad that bubbles got all of her superpowers back all by herself without chemical x she got them back naturally they should not have been taken away from her in the first place

Oh no! Please let them be alright...both Bubbles AND Shakti. Though I've got a feeling that Shakti may only become a hero posthumously (is that how it's spelt?)

Roll on the final chapter (or maybe the penultimate one, I'm not entirely sure). Whatever chapter it is, bring it on soon anyway, OK? Please?

A big showdown, in the next chapter! I shall look forward to it!

Well, by what you're seeing, the Professor is busy making something for Shakti, and the girls are too busy fighting. They don't have the time to give Bubbles back the use of her powers. Besides, the real reason I didn't have her get her powers back was because she needed to not be able to use them in order for Shakti to harness more power.

It is Shakti who destroys Mr. Mime, not the Powerpuff Girls.

i can,t believe it they have a lot of extra emercency vials of chemical x handy for when any of the girls lose their superpowers so why don,t they just give bubbles a lot of it so that her powers will be restored i can,t believe her powers keep getting taken away stupid mister mime i can,t believe how mean they were being to her

Nice to see Mr. Mime got socked. Update soon!

Poor Robyn (and her mother). It's just fortunate for Shakti that she is being honest about not remembering anything of the event, or she'd be in little pieces in another few short minutes!

But how is Mr. Mime controlling her...? I take it he's going to use Shakti to kill the PpG, but why? Does he want to take over the world, or is he purely being driven out of the necessity for revenge against the girls this time (hence killing Robyn)?

Anyway, this was a great chapter - I think you were right to up the rating to R at this point. I'm looking forward to seeing more soon, hopefully. Until then, bye!

I can't believe Robin got killed. Poor kid. ;_; And it was pretty gory, too! I think the "R" rating is more approporiate for this scene. Anyway, Looking forward to the upcoming chapter soon.

yes... i love this story...

Continue soon!

I wonder how Mr. Mime is going to try to exact his revenge? Guess I'll just have to wait for another couple of chapters, won't I? Great story, and please hurry up and post the next part soon please!

Hmmm...Shakti and Bubbles seems to have a telepathic link of a sort, perhaps? Please do continue!

Yes, I know I made some mistakes.

Oh, about the nightmares, they are premonitions of the future. For Shakti, she isn't being controlled. She still thinks of herself as evil, but in the next few chapters, she starts to show some changes. The next chapter is the beginning of this. It's called "Recoiling".

For Mr. Mime, since I've only seen him once, and he got everyone in Townsville except Bubbles, I thought he'd make a good major villain. You'll have to wait until later chapters to find out his plans, though. He may appear in the next chapter.