I love this, I love your style of writing it's so different, can't wait for update x

It gets good each chapter. The big build up and the talk of assassins and Templars, great. The beginning of the war, like that concept. The idea of not only the problems that have occurred at that time but incorporating the people in it. Not too overbearing and slowly getting there. I like how you say that they are not related by blood. Been reading the books? I wonder how events will go with these characters. I also wonder if we will see the Generals of the war. They played a major part and I would also like to see how the assassins will deal with it.

I really like this so far, though there are some typos and the way you use past and present tense at the same time is kind of weird to me but it's still good :)

A hanging taking place? No one knows who their leader is? A trap? Oh, this just keeps getting better. So much conspiracy happening in one small town. How will they handle it when the truth arises? True to assassins creed with the twist and turns. Makes me wanna read more! Moar!

Mister Abe Lincoln... This is getting pretty intense. The election, Jim Bob trying to make the future president his ally even though he doesn't know what is going on. So many elements that need to be answered and our first assassination by William. I am in love with your story and William seems to be... Dare I say it... Kind of like his ancestor with the whole the Creed matters more. I bet you are getting excited about the new game as I am too. :D Enough of me ranting, cannot wait for the new chapter. How will things go down and will Leanna and William get along... Oh, and the thieves are a classic part of Assassin's Creed.

Another good chapter. With each new posting it draws me in closer and closer. William is going to be a favorite character for me in this story, but I cannot wait to see how you depict the generals of the civil war when the time comes. I hope we get interaction between the characters. I would love to see thieves, more so in the story. Well, that is my view but I would love to see it. Also I wonder when both Leanna and William actually meet. That is going to be intresting. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

I really love how this story is going! I'm definitely excited to read future chapters :)

I wonder what Ethan plans on doing with Leanna... Will he be the bad guy in this story, I was not expecting him to be one but that was a surprise to me. He seemed to be one of those characters you might not here much from, but I guess you wanted a surprise. I will wait for another chapter and see what will happen next. I like how you are taking this story slow and not rushing into the war like some stories do.

I wonder what secrets this Leanna will discover... Is she a descendant of an assassin. I wonder of this William as well. It is pretty clear that the older man is Conner. But I cannot wait to read another chapter of this story.

This story has some nice potential. One Wong that it is different from the assassins creed plolot. Your stories are just wonderful and I enjoy reading them. Leanna seems to be a good character and her personality is great in my opinion. Just make sure she does not get to Mary-sue. :) female characters tend to go that route, but so far I don't see that happening with her. XD

Jim Bob ahahaha I like that name

Woo AWESOME CHAPTER! :D Cant wait till the next one! :D

This is good! I take it the assassin is Connor (it is Connor isn't it? XD) anyways I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Wow I, glad someone wrote something like this! I was going to write something like this, but never really got around to it :P although it was very different plot wise, it's still based around a southern belle. Good job :)