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| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 9,  | abuseholy cow that was long! but very cute =) i can't wait for more! |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 8, | abuseaw i hope eriya is happy =) |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 7, | abusevery interesting... raising all sorts of questions about those cat twins and what's going on in Zaibach... yes, i'm assuming it's Zaibach lol unless it's Arzas but i doubt it =P |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abusecute chapter =) |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 5, | abusethank god for Chid lol i'm glad somebody finally clued Van in to what was going on! |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abuselol i must admit, i laughed hysterically at the scene where the men are getting practically ripped to shreds by hysterical fan-girls (or women, whichever you prefer). especially the part where Allen gets angry that his hair will be messy! |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 3, | abusei still really like your story, but you are going to have to forgive my nitpicking. i understand it probably makes more sense for where you are trying to take this story, but this chapter just didn't sit well with me. if Celena mentioned possibly knowing something about Hitomi's past, don't you think that Hitomi would have asked more questions? furthermore, wouldn't Celena have mentioned it to somebody? and lastly, if Hitomi was hanging around with Celena constantly for three whole weeks, wouldn't somebody else have seen her and possibly recognized her? just a few questions i was asking myself during this chapter! despite that, it was very well written =) |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 2, | abuseinteresting developments... the only thing i didn't like was how giggly Millerna was; she really wasn't that 'blonde' in the show. And there's one line where you were describing Dryden and you wrote brunette-haired; brunette refers to a woman and doesn't require the word haired after it. brown-haired probably would have worked better =) |
| KatsuTami 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseintriguing =) can't wait to read more! |
| omgshoes 2008-08-01 ch 9, anon. | abuseomg, this is a great story. Its very well-written and the characters are true to their personalities. looking forward to the next chapter! |
| SpandexTree 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseI can't believe Van told Hitomi everything! That was a real shocker! And the fight between Celena, Gaddes, and Mamorou was intense. Thanks for not giving up on this amazing story! This update really made my day. |
| Sora Sings 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseI love this story! I can't wait for an update, the story flows smoothly and has a very creative plot! |
| Suils Saifir 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseAw! I love the ending of the chapter! And it's really starting to heat up, emotionally and politically. Lovely long long update! And the couplings of Celena/Gaddes, and Mamoru/Naria are very very cute! |
| thepinkmartini 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseYay! An update! I totally love the story and I appreciate the fact that the chapters are always long! |
| Geminia 2008-07-28 ch 9, | abuseYour writing has improved so much from chapter to chapter ^^ I cannot say anymore than that it was excellent and I cannot wait for your next long amazing update ^^ Gemini |