When will you update cant wait til you do again

it'll be interesting to see how they survived in the core

Very interesting, however what type of story/episode are you trying to write? I believe one that involves us trying to imagine what is there since there is no description of the planet what-so-ever

Well I like it so far.

We need this story keep it up. Good start but... stretch out the fun revealing stuff like solutions... feel the story when you get to those parts.

I kinda like it too. You have a good idea there and I'd like to see more of it.

I did find the script style a little odd though; and the part where you have 'People' gives me the image of a crowd all speaking in unison like the crowd scenes in Monty Python's 'Life of Brian' (give it a google, there's probably a clip on youtube).

Anyway, it's a nice idea that would benefit from being fleshed out a bit. Good luck with it.

hi that was very good but you may of solved to meany thing to fast but please write more .
james

I think you should keep writing this story i like it