Ahhhhhhhhhhh
U should soooo write another chapter

I think this was a really great story :) I absolutely adore the way you portrayed Yuki in this. Also, You have a fantastic vocabulary! :D Although, I do think you should have made the end a little more interesting. Perhaps you could've gone on. Overall, Great job!

That's so sad...

I like it but you should have put a little more detail into it and I think that the part where Yuki is about to confess should have gone a little smoother. Also I want you to follow up, like what happens to Yuki? Who was running through the water? You shouldn't just end your story there.

Well...someone likes depressing one-shots.
That would be me. :D But you, too.
One-sided Yuki/Tohru! Beautiful! You express pain so well; better than I could.
Bye now,
Echo

omg.. That was really emotional
I have tears in my eyes! Youre an excellent writer!