|Reviews for The Evening Dust|
| Raum 10/11/12 . chapter 1
Nice and intriguing!
| TessLouise 10/11/12 . chapter 1
Awesome! Great premise.
| Camilla10 10/10/12 . chapter 3
I loved this to bits. It is something to reread when one needs to be cheered up.
I have only a quetion: What about Alice? Why did she leave her quest? that part leaves a non finished feeling.
| Camilla10 10/10/12 . chapter 1
I found this story recced on ADF and it i L.
(But why would a vampire buy a cherry beverage? that had me puzzled)
| Capricorn75 10/7/12 . chapter 3
This chapter gave me those wonderful butterflies that I got when I read Twilight. Not many writers can do that, bring that feeling back. Thank you so much! I really loved this- don't be a stranger when it comes to writing and posting :-D
| Capricorn75 10/7/12 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh! I am seriously swooning here! You've given Edward such a rich, flesh-out voice! He is 100% teenage boy and 100% hundred year old vampire. This is seriously fantastic :-D
| Capricorn75 10/7/12 . chapter 1
Oooh, I like this. I love fics where Vampward and Bella meet under non-canon circumstances. This cracked me up:
"Get out of town!" Bella exclaimed...
"I already did," I replied.
| moosals 10/6/12 . chapter 3
This was such a beautifully imagined story and a plausible alternative to the original. Thank you so much...I wil put a smile in the other two chapters just because :)
| moosals 10/6/12 . chapter 2
Thank you :)
| moosals 10/6/12 . chapter 1
| roon0 10/4/12 . chapter 3
This was lovely and I enjoyed it hugely.
| Annie 10/1/12 . chapter 2
you are such a lovely writer. i really enjoyed this. thank you so much! it was so sweet.
| Hushi Taloa 10/1/12 . chapter 3
This story was AMAZINGLY sweet and romantic. I loved it, and just wished it were longer. Did Alice see Edward meeting Bella? Is that why she had her sudden change of heart? Will there be resolution with the nomads? It feels like... there's more story in you waiting to be told. Or probably that's just wishful thinking.
Anyway, thank you so, so much for writing.
| naruto and twilight fan33 9/30/12 . chapter 3
| Guest 9/28/12 . chapter 3
Great! I really like this less infuriatung Bella and Edward...heehee!