Reviews for The Evening Dust
se7en29 9/27/12 . chapter 2
Like it? No, no, no, I love it! Amazing work, update soon please...
MaraJadeS 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Great story so far can't wait for your next update.
lindyrb 9/26/12 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story...as soon as I saw it pop up in my email alerts, I dropped everything and settled in to read. Can't wait to see what happens to these two on the road and when they get back to Forks!
roon0 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Your story is totally awesome. I love it.
roon0 9/26/12 . chapter 1
I am truly loving your take on Twilight.
Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 2
amazing:) :D
MaraBenefici 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Like? No... LOVE would be more accurate. I'm so happy to read your writing again. Yours was one of the first FF's I'd ever read years ago. Thank you!
Scorpio11 9/26/12 . chapter 2
I love that they were thinking so much alike. While he was trying to figure out how to talk to her again, wanting her to come with him, she was busy packing.
Holidai 9/26/12 . chapter 2
I really liked the way they spent time together. Is Bella running away? Did she leave her mom a note? I hope their journey gives them the answers they need/want. I also really hope you don't ever have Edward leave her but they've just met so...;)
twilightstuff 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Love it, will there be more?
viola1701e 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Hehehe, is Bella the reason why good old Alice will come home after all? Because she saw Bella becoming more to Edward...and the best friend she never had? Well Jasper can thank Bella for bringing his wife back to him.
Great story, hoe you update soon!
twilightstuff 9/26/12 . chapter 1
I love it, Wow. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
flecour 9/26/12 . chapter 2
Sweet story so far! )
kl 9/26/12 . chapter 2
really really good! keep going! x
Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 2
I was surprised Bella knew and that she packed a bag and ran back to him. Good!

I like it a whole bunch! Can't wait for the rest.
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