i totally luv this! itz so true! it tells what goes on with a Jedi's life! just like this poem i read about the dark side, only it was different. but neways, i luv it!

I liked it. Its got good rythym and the rhymes don't sound cheesy at all.

I wish I could write poetry like you...

great poem dude...i think i'll go and see wat else you've written :) i like the idea of writing about a jedi's duty...great idea but mums making me get off so i'll check out wat you've dun l8r