Ok i agree with the other reviews for this one! Please dont abandon this story! The premise is fantastic and i want to know what happens next. please continue :)

Oh I am hoping this hasn't been sacrificed to the abandoned stories gods. It's really well written and has so much potential.

Please continue writing this.

So, I've just caught up with this. I know you're working on your novel - which is no doubt wonderful - but whenever you do get a chance to add more to this story...I'll be waiting. God, what a prospect...

She's been dead for a week? Did she drink a potion she got from an apothecary so that she could fake her own death and run away with her Romeo? Ah... no wait, that story doesn't end well does it? There must be another explanation. But, hey, who cares as long as she's alive!

I am so looking forward to the next instalment, please make it soon!

Oh, please keep writing. I'd love to see the reunion and have them run away together and live happily ever after!

I am looking for more and love the difference in ending. Though a little confused as to exactly what happened. I am pretty sure you will help that so I'll say no more. Keep up the great job...

Oooh goody - a new Ballyk fic to read. I love the premise, and the emotion and the humour you have caught in the first two chapters really comes across to me.

Being medically trained, I am not quite sure how she could have been assumed dead for a whole week but I realise that the story wouldn't work if it was earlier than that in the timeline and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, yes. Continue!

Oh wow, nice start! Nice to see another new author too. More please!

Intriguing start! Can't wait to read more!

She's alive! Always a promising start ;)
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