|Reviews for The Lion's Guest|
| Jessica Lure Whitlock 5/16/13 . chapter 9
Daww isn't Tywin sweet
| Jessica Lure Whitlock 5/16/13 . chapter 6
Yummy milk of the poppy ;)
| Jessica Lure Whitlock 5/16/13 . chapter 5
Once again you up the ante!
| Jessica Lure Whitlock 5/16/13 . chapter 4
Brilliant, so full of intrigue and intensity, definitely a highly superior fanfiction. Love these two as a couple :)
| Jessica Lure Whitlock 5/16/13 . chapter 3
Deserves more reviews, brilliant story! Love your characterisation, especially the realism of tywin. :)
| MissMac 5/14/13 . chapter 1
"Yes my lord I am aware of how to be a woman."
That is by far one of the best lines I've read in a fanfic. I literally chuckled out loud. I just found this story and I will probably be reviewing every chapter as I read them. I hope you are ready for my quirky reviews!
First off, I love Tywin. He is one of my favorite characters. From this first chapter, I sense that you will write him well and in character. So far I am intrigued by this plot and it is nice to read a story with a fresh idea. I will be diving into this story properly soon, and I am excited to see where you take this story.
| jules14 5/12/13 . chapter 32
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed this story before now, but I have been following it since the third chapter, and it's one of my favorites in this fandom.
I applaud you for writing a fic about Tywin, since he's one of the most complex, fascinating characters in the series, and one of my favorite villains in literature. Unfortunately-but not surprisingly-he's overlooked in favor of the younger generation. Of course, the fact that he's played by Charles Dance might have something to do with my fascination.
Usually I'm wary of OCs, since they often turn into blatant Mary Sues, but you did a marvelous job with Ailyn. I feel like she should be an example of how to write a proper OC for this fandom. She doesn't dazzle everyone in Tywin's camp with her beauty; she doesn't constantly whine about her tragic past; she accepts her role as a noble lady in Westeros, with everything it entails; she has her own friends, family, and life besides Tywin; and, most importantly, she doesn't take over the story and make everything all about her.
The only problem I have with Ailyn is her skill with weapons. I feel that this wasn't necessary, and it's a common characteristic of Game of Thrones Sues. On the other hand, Ailyn doesn't awe the hardened Lannister warriors with her skills, and she doesn't use her skills to show off and impress Tywin, so it's not obnoxious.
The sex scene wasn't explicit, but it was well-written, and better than most in the sense that it showed Tywin's and Ailyn's affection for each other. You did a beautiful job in having Tywin show his feelings, not through words, but through his actions and behavior-kissing her more gently than before, and relaxing around her.
I don't know if you're going to continue this story, but it is very good.
| GuestSmiling 5/11/13 . chapter 32
Don't hesitate to write more lemon scene! This chapter was perfect! Please UPDATE SOON! BYE!
| Meri 5/10/13 . chapter 32
Great love scene...I liked the feeling of being the 'fly on the wall' for it. I know Ailyn's got some tricks up her sleeves (or lacking in some cases)! I wonder what you'll be adding in next.
| Jofrench22 5/10/13 . chapter 32
Good of you to update sooner! It was a perfect chapter! I love the surprise of Ailyn for Tywin! The sex scene is good and the end of the chapter is exciting! I love to see them intimate after having make love. I can't wait to read another chapter! Maybe it will be the morning after? BYE!
| HermioneandMarcus 5/10/13 . chapter 32
excellent chapter update and i can and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
| LittleNK 5/10/13 . chapter 32
"please use your amazing imaginations!" LOL, okay! Thanks for the update, it's faster than previous chapters, isn't it?
| Meri 5/6/13 . chapter 31
| Anonymouse 5/5/13 . chapter 31
Are you telling me I have to wait a week to know what the gift is?
Ugh, I haven't been this excited since the premiere of season three.
| Jofrench22 5/5/13 . chapter 31
It was a great chapter! I love it when Ailyn flirts with Tywin about her tongue! I can't believe i have another week to wait for the chapter of the wedding night! I can't wait! I'm curious about Ailyn's surprise for Tywin! I hope there will be a lemon scene (but i'm sure!)! This is really a frustrating end of chapter and i hope you will update soon! Bye!