| Reviews for Yugioh GX America: The American Duel Academy Story |
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menatron 5/10/13 . chapter 30Good chapter. I am a little bit disappointed that there was no actual dueling, but it was great that you didn't forget about Chef Ramses signature thing. (Sorry if I spelled that wrong. I'm using voice software. |
Noel the mermaid 5/8/13 . chapter 30Awesome chapter, I wanna see more... I really like this. |
Guest 4/27/13 . chapter 29 Hey, sorry for review late... The was pretty good like always, I really want to know what's going to happen next... |
menatron 4/24/13 . chapter 29Good chapter. You're right,through. The duel was pretty short. Oh well, Hopefully the next one will be better. |
kai truesdale 4/24/13 . chapter 29nice story i read it all can you read my story i really would like you guys to read and review it |
menatron 4/21/13 . chapter 28First of all, mad respect for the idea of putting Chef Ramsey in the Yugioh universe. I don't believe anyone else has thought of having real-life celebrities in Yugioh before. So good for you. With that said, you did make one crucial mistake with the character. We both know that Chef Ramsey from Hell's Kitchen is not authentic unless he unfortunately swears every other word. I'm not saying you should actually do that because I'm not that type of person. However it would help the authenticity of the character if he were to drop some profanity every now and then. Other than that, who is a great chapter and a great new concept. Not to mention appealing to the health-conscious and green crowd as well. Can wait for the next one. |
4fireking 4/18/13 . chapter 1I wonder how Sam will do. I'm sure she'll do great. |
MercWithTheMouth13 3/27/13 . chapter 27This is good and all and I'll let you finish, but the Miami Heat's winning streak was done in by a certain team, from a certain town, that is known across the land as the city of pork chops. I'm of course referring to...Da Bulls. *Raises beer glass* DA Bulls! |
Noel the mermaid 3/27/13 . chapter 27The chapter was okey, it's always interesting to see the past of some characters... Take your time to write. |
menatron 3/26/13 . chapter 27An okay chapter I guess. It would have been nice if there was a duel in the flashback but whatever. |
LeTantris 3/8/13 . chapter 26This chapter revealed some good bits. I feel satisfied just reading it. |
Noel the mermaid 3/8/13 . chapter 26Great chapter, this is very interesting... Update soon... |
menatron 2/6/13 . chapter 26Interesting chapter, man. Interesting twist to grow in the direction of duelist kind of turns to the dark side anyway although not the way the bad guy had planned. Now they have to do the whole make her rediscover respect for her opponents thing blah,blah,blah,etc. (if you ask me the whole Yugioh franchise had to be inspired by either the Rocky movies or any one of the Disney sports movies.) I'm a little bit disappointed that Serena's debut was kind of short. However, if she wins the contest I imagine we'll be seeing a lot more of her. Please don't forget to tell me who wins. FYI,AnimeMasterZero, one of the people behind GNext, also has a Power Rangers fanfic out. I was just reading it a few minutes ago and it seems pretty good as repetitive as Power Ranger incarnations can be. (I say that when I am perhaps the Power Rangers oldest living supporter.) Just thought you'd like to know that so you could check it out. |
amberprimrose3906 2/3/13 . chapter 25Awesome chapter, as always! Nice use of "Royal Dragon Cleric" and "Eirin" {-}! I'll try making more cards, especially the ultimate 'Dark Dragon beast' monster. |
menatron 2/3/13 . chapter 25A good chapter, although it comes off as a little anticlimactic. I mean, he's telling her his plan now? Although I suppose that's standard super villain protocol. Also, I thought that was going to be a little bit of foreshadowing into Serena's backstory. I suppose you're saving that to see if she wins the contest. Really excited to see the new card in the next chapter. And FYI, I agree with the whole Conner/Serena pairing. It would be interesting to see, especially when you consider that Native American story about rattlesnakes. You'd know it if you read the Percy Jackson series. Do you read it, just out of curiosity? Just remember that sooner or later we are going to have to have the obligatory morality speech from the hero character so Serena can start the hero's journey. |