|Reviews for The Secret of the RAF|
| Chris7221 11/12/12 . chapter 1
In all honesty, there's not a lot of good things I can say about this piece. I'm not sure if it's in the right category or even if it should be on this site. It's awkward to read, relies on imagery but does a lot of telling and not enough showing. With that being said, I'm now looking up the original story, so I suppose it succeeded in that regard.
| FORD B 9/26/12 . chapter 1
Very good! I'll check out the info now.