Poor Jimmy! I love this :D

I don't know how I haven't read your story sooner. I absolutely love that you're doing the individual stories, I think that's really great because it allows us to see things from each characters stories. I liked Ben's chapter, and I loved Tom's, so I'm really, really looking forward to where you're headed with this, and who you'll do the chapter of next! I enjoyed it, very much, and looking forward to your next update :)

a world left forgotten sounds like its going to be good cant wait till you post it

When I saw an update by you in my inbox I was so happy! And you did not disappoint! :)
Crying now... I love the Masons so much (I may have mentioned that!) and you really captured Tom here... :)

Maybe for Hal you could show something about him almost getting caught by a Skitter? Or maybe when his mom died? You know, what he went through and all? Or maybe when he decided to become a fighter? Just some things I thought would be interesting to know! :-) Great story so far!

Ahhh I loved it! Thank you so much for posting this, I seriously think it's a brilliant idea!

I'd like to see Hal or Tom next; maybe a Mason-family-love moment? :D

Do Tom or Matt next

This is so good! Poor Ben... I can't imagine what it would feel like to be harnessed etc... and you captured that really well :)
I've not got any ideas as such for those characters, only that you should write for all of them! You could do some more from what we know from the show - When Rebecca Mason died, when the masons found the 2nd mass, when Weaver tried to save his family etc... and some original ideas too - because your original ideas are always amazing :D