You're great to write such an enjoyable story (I don't like Severus/Hermoine parings, but I love your story) and update so often. You're the best .

HA! I knew it was St. John! What a bastard! OMG, please, please, write more. I think this is your best story yet (and that's sayin' something)

awww i tot st john was always a nice guy.

but he lkinda fits lucious profile, uncaring n looks of an angel

Well, I never liked St. John in the first place, but, wow! I really liked that twist of plot. I don't remember if I reviewed the previous chapter, but I don't think I did.

Anyways, I loved both, and I can't wait til you update. You sure do write a lot!

Update soon and keep writing great stories!

-Aerial ;-)

Now this was a masterful twist, making St. John Rivers a squib...deep frustration and resentment just oozes out of him. Nasty little bugger. And Blanche Ingram the money-hungry Dark Witch? Very nice. The bit at the end was good too because opium was a scourge in that time period. This story just gets better and better.

For the record, I did have them in Gryffindor...that is why Remus comments how being in Gryffindor does not automatically mean a person is brave (as is the case with Wormtail) just as being a werewolf did not automatically mean he belonged in Slytherin. Thanks for reading!

The mauruauders James Potter,Peter Pettigrew,Sirius Black and remus Lupin wre all in you don't believe me,read the third comes out and says it.

*blinks* Well... that was... worrisome. Please keep going.. you said the end of the story is near. I'm dying to see what happens. Great work.

Ooh, I like the wicked and screwed up St John Rivers...

A prediction before I read chapter 10 about how they'll escape from the book: "Reader, I married him" - in other words, they simply have to get to the end of the novel (but hopefully withour a blinding episode..)

Fantastic I love her being kidnapped.. Write more soon..

*shudders*

Wow... You're brilliant... And scary! Wow...

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Marek

brilliant! continue soon, the suspense is killing me!

I feel like Severus... I don't know anything about the book, so every new character is a surprise... And yet it makes the fic even better to read! Brilliant once again! Thanks!

Marek

You're still brilliant! Thanks!

Marek

P.S. AFAIK JKR said that all the Marauders were in Gryffindor... I think...