This is a great set up. Do you plan to continue this story? I like how Gabrielle is blackmailing her but I know Nico can handle that too. He barely confessed feelings for her, you need write a chapter from his point of view. Your characters are believable and I like how you didn't make Matt out to be a bad guy the whole time. Matt needed to convince Dani to go to NIco. Matt is smart enough to realize Nico is good at his job.

WHAT?! Seriously no update! Okay, I see where you were in College when you were writing this, okay...are you still in College? Have you started a career as to where you can't or don't really have the time? At any rate, I hope life is being good to you and that all is well. I'm very interested in your story and need to know if you could please, PLEASE give us an update or thin about it. Caught my eye and I loved it. Thanks for your time and great read. :-)

Don't stop there!

Good chapter. Add more soon.

I love this update but Nico and Vera together in Brazil? Not sure if I like that thought. :-) Can't wait for another chapter!

I am glad she finally told him. He did need to know, he'd be able to figure it out since he knows Gabrielle

Ah, a twist with Vera. I didn't see that one coming. Will he or won't he be with Vera while away. Maybe with the phone from Dani he won't have to travel out of the country at all. I expected Nico to use his Seal stelth training and slink up to Dani's house late at night. It will be interesting what path you take us now. I hope there is no back slidding with Matt while Nico and Vera are out of town.

Great chapter! This story is already so addicting three chapters in! You illustrate
Nico perfectly!

This story is addicting, please update soon. I can't wait until Nico confronts Gabrielle. What is Gabrielle thinking, Nico is going to wipe up the floor with her! Love your writing style, the chapters read quick but full of an exciting story and the characters are true to their tv personality.

Gabrielle Pittman. Ugh, can someone please get rid of this woman! I really hope Nico will take care of her. Soon.

Thanks so much for updating that quickly! This is getting better and better. Great job! Want more ;-)

Loving this premise! I really enjoy where this story is going and can't wait to see where you take it. Please post the next chapter soon!

Oh this is good...but I do kinda feel sorry for Gabrielle when Nico does figure out what she's up too...it won't be pretty!

Gabrielle is just evil! Though Nico will figure it out, just hope it's not too late! Dani better start coming up with a plan of her own.

Sometimes, I have this feeling that Dani tries to safe the world all by herself. She should know by now that Nico is pretty much the only person who was always there for her and someone she can trust. Great update. Loved the kiss!