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   Sam55 11/13/02 . chapter 5! Youve got it all wrong dear. Why should Riley fall for JB? Why not make it interesting and say that she should fall in love with Jett then later on have her fall in love with JB. You NEED to have some drama in the story. Romance always last. Drama is first, romance is last. You need to make everyone be captured by your words. Oh yeah you need to make everyones sayings seperate. I was having a hard time following what people were saying. Take some good advice from someone who has been writing for 2 years. I know when I need to make sure the reader is understanding what each character is saying and doing Sam |
| knightriderfanforever 8/4/02 . chapter 5 Keep it up. Those songs are great. :) |
| gracie3 7/25/02 . chapter 3 YAY! you updated! woo hoo! grrrrrreat chapters, especially the song interlude! |
| diamondforever 7/22/02 . chapter 3 awesome story, plz write more |
| grifftiff 7/21/02 . chapter 1 I love this story! I know that this is mostly about Riley and JB (at least right now). But could you also create a storyline with a little more of Jett and Kayla. But, the story is awesome so far...PLEASE UPDATE! |
| Nikkity Noc 87 7/19/02 . chapter 1 So far it's sounds like a good story, you should definitely write more! |
| gracie3 7/18/02 . chapter 1 YAY! very nice! jett/kayla and jb/riley.. the perfect fic. now for a nag: more please! |
