I like this :)

Ceu Praca... so this is where you've been hiding. just so you know whenever i find you writing another story i'm gonna say something like this

Chapter 9 and 10...Aww, it's so nice to see her soft side like this.

So, this is the Captain Zerir that Samus told Link about. Looks like he's touched Samus with his pushiness lol. This story is really good. Even though we might know his end, it's interesting to see how it affects her.

Very touching and awesome story here. My condolences, by the way, and this story's impressive. I also like the thing about Christianity being different from religion, probably 'cause I too believe the same (something about how religion is man-made and just believing in Christ and his death for sins as something good and true is enough along with living for him). Peace and keep up the good work with this work piece - well done. :)