Please please please PLEASE keep writing I'm already so in live with this oh my god pallets:

This is very well done! I did not notice any obvious errors in grammar. I love the fact that you wrote the characters the way that they would behave in the novel. I can easily see Sean and Puck saying these.

I would be interested in reading more on this story! :)

Yay, thanks for making this story

Nice, so far! D I loved it!

Woah! This is pretty good, you almost wrote it exactly like the author! Sounds interesting so far.

This sounds dead good :D Lovin it so far :) and I'm guessing you like the hunger games? Lol :D