Okay I loved this and deserved way more reviews! The only thing I didn't like to much was Jason's use of all of Dick's quotes in the movie. They were just too...Dick... and Jason was becoming Red Hood too not becoming more like Dick... However I did like the backstory on Dick and why he left so the story made more sense and the addition of Timmy! Overall it was fantastic!

The story is an interesting concept and very well developed. However, it is slightly confusing when you are talking about Red Hood. I personally think that Jason would have been more like Dick, as a way to emulate Dicks behavior. You have to remember too, Dick could have ended up like Jason after being immersed in the Pit. People grow up differently based upon their expierences,

This was a great concept and could've been a great story, but you need to work on the originality of your prose.
While this story differed from the movie in several key aspects, the bulk of the narrative read as a transcript. Many of the changes were affected as name swaps alone, failing to account for the differences in the two Robins' personalities, while the others lacked depth. The ending was particularly cliche and Mary-Suesqe.

That said, keep practising and I'm sure you'll get better :)

perfect story. so great. awesome.

thank you for this delight

Interesting. I liked it.