please update(TT) I love how the characters come to life in the story.I wish I could write like this its like a work of art.

Wowa-wewa! It'sa gooda story-ya!

In reading this chapter, I really felt a lot happened. Surprisingly! It was all so smooth. Hmm... :)

What I got from this one is a revitalization of her quest, and Kazama still cold as ever. I hate how he's like that, and it's ten times worse for humans, I think. Well, I lied. I love it! (Probably wouldn't give the time of day to the real thing though)

What I REALLY like about your story, is I feel like I'm in the thick of it - the scenery feels intense, even though you don't describe it overmuch. For example, I could imagine the war-torn battlefield and the sentinel of a Castle looming over it. I could fill in the details and it was in conjunction with your story, which is great!

I'm really impressed with your work, it's amazing.

Hmm, I'm trying to find something I didn't like. Meh, it's so trivial. Literary works can always be improved and improved ad infinitum - please continue with your story and...

Something I didn't like!

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UPDATE FASTER! :P

Sorry I took so long x.x I've got my emails linked now so I get push notifications through either account! I commit to being more punctual in the future!

Good job on this chapter :) it was really interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I've got a feeling Hijikata-san might turn up soon ;D

Wow! I love this *follows* I'm looking forward to the next ones XD

I really loved chapter 17. I cant wait for chapter 18!

wow i really liked your 1st chapter :) cant wait to read more. i will give you a better review once i read more but i really enjoyed the 1st chapter very good work D

An update, an unpdate! I am so happy that you are back! I still wonder which Shinsengumi she is looking for. I wonder what lies behind tohse doors. Great chapter!

Wow!I am SO happy that you decided to update again! This chapter was really cool ! I loved it! I can't wait to see what's behind that door! So please update ! ;)

finally! an update... ;)
im thankful that you appreciate my reviews and just so u know u just made my day with this update..i love reading your story...
now, on to my review! that part with the "wrong corpse" made me laugh even though i knew right from the start that it wasnt the "man" she was searching for. its the way you portrayed kazama's reaction that was laughable (stupid kaori!). i really admire how you managed to stick to kazamas original character and still be able to introduce a new side of him. as for kaori, i admire her as the story progress, shes not useless and needy and annoying. although she cant really fight but shes got some bite in her unlike chizuru hehe (dont get me wrong i like her too but she was just so damn helpless (-,)) im really looking forward on the romance between the two characters, for me it is a great challenge to present an inlove kazama (especially w/a human!) but i know u can do it coz ur good. ill be waiting for ur next update (no pressure, really! hehe juz kidding!)

noo! Finished way to fast :( updates! Who is the guys that the girl is looking for... Seriously... I tried to not ask, but im getting curoious
hahhahaha

this story is the sole reason i have been checking fanfiction for the past few weeks...this chapter showed a great development between the main characters relationship..and im really looking forward for updates..

Great chapter! Sorry for being so slow x.x I think I can actually say that I'll be quicker now though :) I got a few of the things sorted out now.

Good development! Keep it up!

both of them are so cute! Please update XP

I loved this chapter and kept smiling when Kazama was teasing Kaori

This was awesome ! I really can't wait for your next chapter! :)