Exodus looks like a champion that can be really done except one slight problem. His R, sounds very similar to Veigar's R not to mention that if you take a close look at the way Exodus is being done, he's very reliant on his maximum mana making him either a high difficulty champion or an extremely burst-like mage. For my opinion, (and it is just my opinion you don't have to take it.) You could try to make him a little less mana reliant. I would also love to know his base stats if you have the time.

so ive been wanting to give you guys some ideas on some new champions... i don't know where to post it so i thought i would do it in the general discussion forums.. fortunatly i was able to do this

basticly this guy is and a melee mage ... get in get out with a kill. try to picture him as a wasp with armor and bigger wings. We can call him Watz

passive: puncture wound n 5th attack the target will be delt 50% of watzap ap.(can be adjusted)

Q: Fly: Watz charges to the enemy target and stuns him/her for 1.5 sec dealing 5% of ap damage and brings larva over to enemey
W: Sting : this is watz main move as this will do the most damage as you can immagine maybe 75% of his ap as damage or more.
E: larva: creates a medum sized worm looking thing and it is easy to kill but it does some damage to minion ( will target champ if near by of attacked by watz) damage and armor based on watz ap
R: Swarm: summons tons of small little wasps ( untargetable) to attack all units in a medium sized area will do damage equal to 60% of watz ap .

Lol we won that game actually

This is an example of a design where you need to ask yourself not only "is this going to be fun to play" but "is this going to be fun to play AGAINST." The fun part of the game is being able to cast your abilities and fight the other guy. Mana burn and ability lockdown are two things you do NOT see in League of Legends for this exact reasons.

STOP USING FEET.
feet are not an in game measurement, and the 5500ft I have sometimes seen is a huge measurement in lol terms

faedron
ult "all mana"contradicts with your passive. meaning that there is no minimum to the mana cost for his ult. this means he can cast it at any time, so then the passive is rendered useless.

ut'garde
q fizz
w pretty much just fiora
r "passive"- time governed- factors of time, need a start and an end, which means to get your 4 seconds, you must initiate it. initiate & activate are synonyms, meaning that your passive, is an active.

vassler
q Shaco
e pretty much a mini ult... too op

Nice udyr has to be my fav jungler... Well when ppl play him rt lol. Hmmm I actually think this champs a bit underpowered but then again many ppl thought Caitlyn was too.

Updat soon!

-XM

NERF HIS E! Hahaahaha i love rabbits.

You should nerf some of these guys they are OP haha :D This is great i can finally share my creations with someone plus you're BEEMO and i love beemo.(and Adventure Time, for that matter.).

Also, can we post champ ideas here? I don't see a comment section anywhere..
Ysa, The Shadow Blade
(Assassin, Stealth, Melee)
Passive: One with the shadows-After 10 seconds outside of combat, Ysa becomes invisible. While invisible, her next basic attack deals 100 bonus true damage. This skill has a cooldown of 25 seconds.

Unforgiving Strikes/Explosive Strike-Basic attacks increase her critical strike chance by 5%. This lasts for 5 seconds and can stack up to 6 times. ACTIVATED: At 6 stacks, her next basic attack deals 75 bonus true damage and applies grievous wounds.

Venom-Throws a cask of potent poison that deals magic damage equal to 5% of the target's maximum health and applies blight. Targets with blight take 25% additional damage from Ysa.

Twin Fangs-Ysa instantly appears behind a target and stabs them with her daggers dealing 100/125/130/145/175 physical damage. This ability ignores 25% of the target's armor.

Assassin's Mark-Ysa throws a mark at the target dealing 75/90/100 flat magic damage. The target takes 75/125/150 true damage for 7 seconds and is revealed on the map. Ysa can teleport to the marked target dealing 300 true damage but removing the mark.

Nice except the one thing tht really attic out to me is tht u have today and tomorrow off... U lucky bastard LOOL.

Keep Em coming!

-XM

Lol these are all actually good.
I am leaving this comment on this page because it is my personal favourite. I appologise for bad spelling, but well i am in a rush trying to play league at the same time. the only problem with garrick is that his ultimate is too broken. by that i mean that it needs to be fixed.

Maybe he could be named Fluke?

XDDDDDDDDDDDDD is all I have to say