Good thoughts, but I think that Artemis was out of character. He is smug from time to time, but never quite as arrogant as to say that he has "faced death and won," especially considering the circumstances of the ordeal.

Nice. Well-done they were more in-character than some others I have seen.
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I liked it. The characters were just as they should be, the writing style was excellent, it was of good legth. Perfect. Artemis seemed rather smug for having just been dead. Holly seemed a little too, ah, little. There was hardly any of her through out the story. I hope you write more stories that are as interesting to read as this one. Your grammar was great and I only found one spelling error. Congratulations on a story well done.

Huh. Pretty good. It feels like it should be continued *hinthint*