|Reviews for Pain and Deception|
| JF2747 3/15/13 . chapter 5
Keep up the good work!
| Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 5
Loved this story please write more!
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 5
This was great but to short and I want more.
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 4
Thank Merlin he got there in time.
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 3
I hate cliffies.
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 2
Bad boy Neal!
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 1
| ajota08 1/8/13 . chapter 5
Hi! Good story!I enjoy it so much! I hope sequels... :-D. Marta.
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 5
I enjoyed it...write Nother
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 4
exciting...glad that Peter got there before the anklet was found and destroyed
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 3
Neal should have told Peter from the moment he got the text
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 2
of course I'll stay tuned...this one is getting very interesting
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 1
Neal should have come clean to Peter, who would have protected him
| 5-STAR 11/30/12 . chapter 5
Great story! Loved awesome daddy Peter!
| Squee-bunny 11/29/12 . chapter 5
Yes, write a sequel! _ This fic has been a great read, overall, and this last chapter was especially cute. I would love to see any continuation, with Neal calling Peter 'Dad' and all :) Who can resist? And I love that you've made Peter so affectionate and open with his paternal feelings!
I hope you find the time to write much more!