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  JF2747 3/15/13 . chapter 5 Keep up the good work! |
| Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 5 Loved this story please write more! |
 V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 5This was great but to short and I want more. |
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 4 Thank Merlin he got there in time. |
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 3 I hate cliffies. |
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 2 Bad boy Neal! |
| V. L. Crawford 2/2/13 . chapter 1 Great start. |
| ajota08 1/8/13 . chapter 5 Hi! Good story!I enjoy it so much! I hope sequels... :-D. Marta. |
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 5 I enjoyed it...write Nother |
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 4 exciting...glad that Peter got there before the anklet was found and destroyed |
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 3 Neal should have told Peter from the moment he got the text |
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 2 of course I'll stay tuned...this one is getting very interesting |
| peppe1951 12/12/12 . chapter 1 Neal should have come clean to Peter, who would have protected him |
| 5-STAR 11/30/12 . chapter 5 Great story! Loved awesome daddy Peter! |
| Squee-bunny 11/29/12 . chapter 5 Yes, write a sequel! _ This fic has been a great read, overall, and this last chapter was especially cute. I would love to see any continuation, with Neal calling Peter 'Dad' and all :) Who can resist? And I love that you've made Peter so affectionate and open with his paternal feelings! I hope you find the time to write much more! |
