BEST STORY EVER!

omg lol

BEAUTIFUL. ALWAYS WANTED TO DANCE WITH SLENDY.

I can understand why you'd be worried about burns to your first story, but saying its your first story and showing you're nervous could get you some flames just because people might decide you're easy to pick on. It's your first story. And it's good for its length. So own it. :]

Other than that I really like your story I'm going to add you to my favorite authors list so please do write more!