Cool story so far. Hope to see more soon.

At first I said, "I'm not gonna read this." Then I saw Looper/Inception lol. No one writes anything about Looper so I thought I'd give it a try (:

This chapter makes me feel a little bit better about Joe and Ariadne...I've calmed down a bit since my last review. It's kind of cool how you're going in the future and into the past to make the story-it's all so intricate. I still hope Arthur isn't dead-he completely missed his son's LIFE! It's horrendously tragic. It was a really good chapter though. You did a great job. :)

I can't think of anything to say except thank you and please update soon :) P.S I am in love with your story!

NOOOOOOO! Ariadne CAN'T fall in love with Joe! She belongs with Arthur! She can't just GIVE UP on him and stay with Joe! I don't care how nice or how kind he is to her! Ariadne wouldn't just quit on Arthur! Did Joe brainwash her? How could Joe do that to Ariadne? If he really loved her, he never would pull her away from her happiness with Arthur! Arthur's so AMAZING! I would NEVER just forget about Arthur after everything he's done for Ariadne. What did Joe do to Arthur in the future?! Cliffhangers are so horrible!

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OMG Joe killed Arthur?!
Oh dear...please update soon PLEASE!

YAY! This story is wonderful! Please keep writing!

Oh no!
She's alive! don't believe him Arthur!
Soooooo what's going to happen now?
Please update soon!

So excited! These chapters are so suspenseful! Maybe it's just me, but I get really really excited over small things (like old Joe is with Arthur and young Joe is with Ariadne) and this chapter was awesome! I hope Arthur gets back to Ariadne okay. And I hope Ariadne doesn't have to kill kid Fisher (what would that do to her mindset?). Killing any kid is a bad idea (except to Joe, but his job is kind of to kill people)... Good luck with your story! :)

Oh my god :)
Old and young Joe working together (kind of)
Is there going to be a sort of romance between Joe and Ariadne?
And does Joe look like Arthur? 'Cause they're both played by JGL ya know...well the chapter was short but I loved it !
Hope you update soon!

OMG you have to update! Please!
I love this soooo much! Please update as soon as possible!

Thank you for reviewing! Ahh! Joe knows Arthur and Arthur knows Joe! I can't wait til those two plus Ariadne come together! Dun, dun, dah! :)

Hmmm, interesting... :D

Thank you so much for updating! Pretty pretty pretty please don't let Joe's idea come into reality! Let the idea be as far as it gets from ever occuring! Arthur and Ariadne are meant to be together and they can't have never met!