Nicely done. Enjoyed the memories of childhood presented in the story

Your story is well written, warm, and filled with tenderness. Enjoyed it very much.

Thanks so much for your reviews - glad you enjoyed reading! Hope to post more ASJ fics before too long.

Great first ASJ story. Very well written and you portrayed a loving relationship in a caring and understated way. Nice work!

Aww bless! Nicely written. You captured their individual characters well and kept the story going at a good pace, making for a very enjoyable read. Thanks.

Hard to believe this is your first ASJ story-it's great! You've got the characters down well, the plot is realistic, and the slash aspect is believable. I really liked Kid's memory of his childhood birthday and that Heyes knew exactly how to make him feel better. Looking forward to reading more from you!

I loved this! The gentleness of their relationship and the intertwining of dreams of cookies to the real deal! Thanks

Slash is not my favorite category, but I thought you handled this with sensitivity and grace. Your writing shows a facility for language, plot and characterization. I look forward to reading your next stories.

Congratulations! Well done!
That is so sweet - and even calorie-free (only leaves me with a craving for cookies...)