|Reviews for Control|
| beachdreamer-nyc 6/14/13 . chapter 37
Great job with this tough story. It keeps in character I feel and is a good transition.
| beachdreamer-nyc 6/14/13 . chapter 26
Agreed. Its abuse and why we hate Elena. She is definately taking advantage of his emotional issues. But its also fiction. Its difficult for me to even view this Christian as a child. He's old beyond his years because of his past - a weary man stuck in a 16 year olds body.
| beachdreamer-nyc 6/14/13 . chapter 24
An eye rolling Christian! HA!
| beachdreamer-nyc 6/14/13 . chapter 19
Great chapter. I like the deviation from the original story, it still fits...the braid, his approach. It reminded me of his first few times with Ana. He's still in character...rough, compassionate, fifty shades. Nice work. But boy is he going to be in trouble!
| beachdreamer-nyc 6/14/13 . chapter 7
I am glad you are tackling this part of the story. I have often thought it would be interesting to understand how Christian's relationship with Eleana evolved. I hope you take it to the point he becomes a Dom. On to the next chapter...
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 37
Such an amazing fic, well done. Truly pulled me in.
Hope you do a sequel, maybe with Christian and his doms? I think it'd be really good!
Really do hope you make a sequel
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 35
The scene in the hospital was so sad.. Its wrong but I did get teary tbh... What they did was wrong, she did take advantage of him but I think she did fall in love with him... *sigh*
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 27
This chapter was so intense I had to pause a couple of times lol
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 21
Omggg this chapter was so intense, you're such a good writer
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 19
I love that you're not sticking to the original story and making it different. Loved Christian's first experience as a dom
| Guest 3/31/13 . chapter 18
This chapter was so intense omg
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 14
Ooo loved this chapter. Made me feel sorry for elena tbh
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 12
Loving this more and more as I go on
| zara 3/31/13 . chapter 6
Just started reading this and I'm amazed at the way you write. I can literally feel what christian goes through. Love it. And is it bad if I say that this fic is definitely by guilty pleasure? Lol, I've always wondered what happened between christian and elena, and this fic does exactly what I need, can't wait to read the rest
| stine1 3/22/13 . chapter 37
I have really enjoyed reading this story and would like to thank you for writing it.