|Reviews for The Gap|
| Sueannd 5/21/13 . chapter 30
Yeah I love this story hope it never ends!
| A FRIEND 5/17/13 . chapter 30
OK LOOK I KNOW YOU HAVE BUSINESS OUTSIDE THIS STORY. BUT YOU HAVE NOT WROTE NEW CHAPTER SINCE 4/4/13, OR A NEW STORY. SO I AM HOPE CENT SUMMER IS COME YOU HAVE MORE TIME TO WRITE. SO HOPE SEE SOMETHING SOON
| codedriver 4/19/13 . chapter 30
I am late with a response but I am still reading and looking forward to more whenever it happens
| IrishBug74 4/17/13 . chapter 30
This is a great story, I look forward to reading more!
| eScapefreak 4/8/13 . chapter 11
I know you told me to pace myself, well this is me pacing myself.
This chapter has got me thinking about expectations, about the future and then looking back on how things actually worked out. Very interesting.
I have been feeling a little sad and reading this has helped me to feel a little better. Thank you.
| eScapefreak 4/7/13 . chapter 10
I would never want to live without hot running water. We did for a few months when I was a kid, our hot water heater died and my parents did not have enough money to get a new one. A good way to tell you were poor. I definitely enjoy hot showers and baths that I don't have to boil umpteen kettles and heat saucepans of water for.
On the otherhand I haven't decided about sonic showers yet either!
| eScapefreak 4/7/13 . chapter 9
I loved when I was reading the reviews for the last chapter people were talking about them bring the horses and mule back on to the Enterprise and it looks like they are going to do just that. What a sight to see!
| eScapefreak 4/7/13 . chapter 8
Here I was happily reading along thinking I was going to write a review about how precious new born babies are when Data pops up. That was so unexpected, I wasn't thinking about the Enterprise at all. I was so wrapped up in the warmth of a new born that it was almost as if the other world did not exist.
Wow. That was good!
| eScapefreak 4/7/13 . chapter 7
10 hours labour is not too bad. It could have been better, but it definitely could have been worse. I'm glad and baby and Deanna are ok.
| eScapefreak 4/7/13 . chapter 6
I hate having to go to the bathroom in the middle of the night in the cold. There is not a lot of central heating here in Australia, but it can still get cold at night in the winter. Sometimes an inside bathroom feels like an outside one. Something to look forward too, it is just starting to get chilly here at night!
How did these people manage to get so many children in one room cabins? I suppose anything is possible out of necessity!
Ok then another one is about to arrive!
| eScapefreak 4/6/13 . chapter 5
I'm going to go with Deanna and say the baby is a girl.
| eScapefreak 4/6/13 . chapter 4
I wonder what it is that Deanna is feeling?
Aren't men stubborn sometimes? But i am sure Beverly will be happier knowing what happened to Jean-Luc and having him home, than worried about what has happened because he is not there. Plus I'm sure Deanna could have that baby any minute, those men should hurry up and get home!
| eScapefreak 4/6/13 . chapter 3
I helped a lady once who had broken her leg the way Jean-Luc has broken his arm. It was not pretty. What you would do for a hypo-spray sometimes!
| eScapefreak 4/6/13 . chapter 2
I loved Will admiring the school teacher. Some things never change.
| eScapefreak 4/6/13 . chapter 1
1903 Tennessee, very rustic, very removed from the Enterprise. I like the beginning. It sets a good foundation; happy families but with some challenges. A very different societal outlook!
I really shouldn't be starting this story until you finish one of your other ones and I finish reading it, but it is too late now... I am reading on.