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| Reviews for Sweet Nightmare |
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   shadowsteed 2/24/13 . chapter 2Can you continue with this? Please? |
| Wolf Vain 2/7/13 . chapter 2 AWSOME! must have more! |
| Dr Facer 11/22/12 . chapter 1 Stories written in second person are not allowed in the site according to item five in the actions not allowed section of the guidelines. I invite you to fix your story by rewriting it so it is in third or first person, a way to involve the reader more would be to keep it first person in the vein of the Twilight books or if you choose third person narrative, avoid mentioning the name of the protagonist. Thank you for your consideration. |
| Fruitlessberry 10/18/12 . chapter 1 woah, this is awesome! Love it. |
| Dream'sRealm 10/9/12 . chapter 2 OMG xD Please write more! |
| SideshowJazz1 10/7/12 . chapter 2 I like your idea, and I will continue to read, but at the same time, there are critiques I need to give. Firstly, I'm guessing that the Freddy you're writing is the 2010 version? Could you make that clear to your readers? Secondly, you need to slow down the relationship, and keep it more physically orientated. Freddy is that forceful type of guy, and you need to make sure he stays that way. On the whole, though, |
| HBPrincessx14 10/7/12 . chapter 2 Nice. :3 Update soon? c: |
| SuperNerdy7777 10/7/12 . chapter 2 Great story! Hope you update! |
| kkoo 10/3/12 . chapter 2 whoa |
| Tell me you're still you 10/2/12 . chapter 2 More! |
| FreddyFan 10/2/12 . chapter 2 Make Freddy more violent, darker and sinister. He wouldn't say to someone that they were cute. |
| HauntedImmortalNightmare 10/1/12 . chapter 1 The ending is kinda cute... I like it :D Update soon! |
| shadowsteed 10/1/12 . chapter 1 Hallo, I really love this story, update soon. :-) |
