PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! I love the whole concept of this story and I've been day dreaming about how it might go since I read it last night! Please write more of this for me oh merciful master!

ohh they finally meet can't wait for the next chapter

love it!

Naruto's life after escape is so interesting and seeing how much Sasuke is interested in Naruto makes me more interested in this story, please keep writing

talk about sexual tention already and noones hiding it either would be just a matter of time if naruto didnt already decide to ...sasukes gonna lose his eye candy poor guy though im sure hell look for where is naruto living now ehile working at a burger joint?very curious whatll happen next cant wait for updates.

kai

I love that this is NARUSASU don't change it!

This is interesting. I somewhat wish that they were longer, but they are still really good and I feel bad about Kakashi.

Ah, so Sasuke is a reporter! I was wondering what role he might play in the story. At first I thought he might be the boy Naruto saw beaten at the beginning of the fic. Then I wondered if it was his fireball that destroyed the base (it's his jutsu in the manga after all). It's interesting that he actually turned out to be an ordinary person and not a bad ass. I also like Kakashi as a down on his luck soldier. It's nice to see him playing a part where he has his own problems instead of the usual role he plays as Sasuke's perverted mentor whose main purpose is to tease him about his love life (or something). Minato as the villain is also extremely awesome. (For once, poor Fugaku has been let off the hook. Sasuke doesn't know the half of it; being a "distant, disapproving father" *really* isn't so bad after all. Not when you compare Naruto's problems with his dad.)

It'll be interesting to see how Naruto meets Sasuke and how Kakashi's storyline ties in with theirs. I assume it's no innocent coincidence that Kakashi is a former soldier when Naruto is the product of military research experiments. There's lots of different directions you could take this fic. With the use of Sasuke's reporter skills, Naruto could work to stop Minato's experiments, maybe track down other test subjects who might have escaped when he did, or possibly try and figure out what happened in the lab the day he escaped and what (or who) caused it? Looking forward to more chapters. :)

This sounds like it'll turn out to be an awesome and very exciting story, I'm, looking forward to the next chapter. :D

sad, its sad what they do to our heros one thing that always had me scared of entering the militry glad i never made a niche for himself quick, wont he beable to go back one the inspectors ,or whoever they really are, leave or will he have to go into some type of hiding from them,im not sure if theyll even do a thurough search for curious whatll happen next.

kai

Like you said, poor kakashi. I wanna cry for him. Narusasu is better. Please update soon

Omigawd this is amazifying

ahh... the majic of fire to destroy all it comes into contact was wrong with gaara, thats what i want to hes newly free...and naked again ahh freedom so whatll happen next.

kai

:3 yay :D this was a nice chappie :3 and noes D: Garra I hope he makes it T-T lol :D but go Naruto. RUN LIKE THE WIND BULLSEYE xD. Lol :P

Keep up the good work and cant wait to see how the plot will develop! :3

I really like your story so far. The plot is really good and your doing an amazing job. Keep up the good work.