|Reviews for The Hobbit- Facebook Version|
| Kili's girl forever 3/12/13 . chapter 4
Awesome I love it please keep writing
| SapphireShelle91 1/4/13 . chapter 4
lol, love this. Can't wait to read more
| Guest 11/28/12 . chapter 1
| FueledByChocolate 10/10/12 . chapter 4
Please note that the guidelines clearly state that stories containing chat/script format isn't allowed here. If you want to keep the basic premise of your story, you can rewrite it in a format that is accepted.
Random name said, "Dialogue goes here."
Quotation marks need to be around the dialogue, dialogue tags are needed, actual description, etc. At the moment this type of story can't stay the way it is on fanfiction. If you don't want to rewrite it, you can do a Google search for places that will allow this type of content and simply remove it from here, and post it on there.
If you decide to leave it here without changing it, your story will be reported for breaking the rules and it will be deleted by a moderator.
| Saraleee 10/2/12 . chapter 4
Love it! Very cute.