| Reviews for A Dark Embrace |
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electracait 5/6/13 . chapter 6Love this fic and each chapter makes me want to read more, that does answer my question :3 thank you! |
electracait 4/14/13 . chapter 5I love this! But I get a bit confused does Alex like Dom or not at all? |
Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 5 It was a really good story i enjoyed reading it .Wen r u goin to upload the next chapter. |
Fae Orabel 2/17/13 . chapter 4Hey, I was the Guest from the previous review, I'm surprised I forgot to sign my name!. But yes, you did improve mostly. Just do like one more once-over before putting up a chapter and you'll catch all the minor things. Focus on commas and spelling first. I really liked reading about Benji's pov and I'm excited to see where you take his character. I liked the way you showed his anger being unnecessary and out of control. Is Benji going to go back and accept the offer to tutor Dom!?. Uh-oh!. Drama city!. Update soon!. Can't wait!. Fae |
Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 3 You have some real talent, and started out really well. Gradually it started to have some minor mechanical errors. But I love your concept, it's a great story. I just want to see more, show me your character's surroundings more, so I feel like I'm standing there watching them. You have some really strong characters too. Awesome!. |
Amy 1/19/13 . chapter 3 I love it. So excited to read the next chapter. Post it soon! |
sk8erboy5 1/1/13 . chapter 2 r u ever going to put more chapters on this fanfic |
beuniqueplese 10/29/12 . chapter 1I love your story, are you going to update it? |
Nicky7994 10/5/12 . chapter 1Loved it hope you update soon |