Reviews for A Dark Embrace
electracait 5/6/13 . chapter 6
Love this fic and each chapter makes me want to read more, that does answer my question :3 thank you!
electracait 4/14/13 . chapter 5
I love this! But I get a bit confused does Alex like Dom or not at all?
Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 5
It was a really good story i enjoyed reading it .Wen r u goin to upload the next chapter.
Fae Orabel 2/17/13 . chapter 4
Hey, I was the Guest from the previous review, I'm surprised I forgot to sign my name!. But yes, you did improve mostly. Just do like one more once-over before putting up a chapter and you'll catch all the minor things. Focus on commas and spelling first.
I really liked reading about Benji's pov and I'm excited to see where you take his character. I liked the way you showed his anger being unnecessary and out of control.
Is Benji going to go back and accept the offer to tutor Dom!?. Uh-oh!. Drama city!.
Update soon!. Can't wait!.

Fae
Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 3
You have some real talent, and started out really well. Gradually it started to have some minor mechanical errors. But I love your concept, it's a great story. I just want to see more, show me your character's surroundings more, so I feel like I'm standing there watching them. You have some really strong characters too. Awesome!.
Amy 1/19/13 . chapter 3
I love it. So excited to read the next chapter. Post it soon!
sk8erboy5 1/1/13 . chapter 2
r u ever going to put more chapters on this fanfic
beuniqueplese 10/29/12 . chapter 1
I love your story, are you going to update it?
Nicky7994 10/5/12 . chapter 1
Loved it hope you update soon