Seems like a good plot but way too many mistakes, grammar, capitalization in dialogue, and more. Please fix, I would like to read the proper version

Fantastic chapter keep it up!

so tsukune is a vampire then

Great great story. Very interesting hurry up and update this already even though you just updated it today

WHY I need another chapter this one was to short noooooo your story is realy good I want more :(

plz plz plz finish

The grammar in this is horrible. I wouldn't mind a mistake every now and then, but this is painted with grammatical errors, making it almost impossible to read. Clean it up, and you might just have a readable fic.

love it

OMG I was so fricken happy when I saw the chapter pop up in my EMail great story and I hope this story goes on so I can read the crap out of it :)

Really good it reminds me of paranormal activity in a way but yeah this is awesome btw can you get Mizore "closer" to Tskune since she is someone who knows how to get the drop on someone from a distance thanks and keep up the good work :)

I like where this is going, hope you make him do a second attempt at death also update soon

This story is so mysterious, i need more

Yeah, I like very much where this is going. I thought Mizore would find him. Of course that is the only thing I figured out. hehe, Interesting suspense. It's just enough to keep going and you seem to be getting better at telling a good story that keeps you wanting more. I had to add this to my favorites instead of just follow with this chapter. We still don't know much about Saya yet but that is probably a good thing. Keep adding a little bit each time or maybe someone can find out a lead on who she is or why Tsukune is so concerned. Well the Rosario will need to be repaired again soon (grins). That was a surprise, Moka will probably be the last and most important one to talk to him unless Kurumu's mother being the adult can get him to open up a little bit. That would give some insight to the story without telling the girls to much. I hope you can keep this story going for a while. I enjoyed your other stories but with each one you seem to be getting better at telling a story so I can live with that. The summary is still a bit of a mystery but I'm sure we will find out eventually at this rate. Maybe Kurumu's mother or Ruby san, probably someone responsible will talk to Tsukune's parents or some other way we can find out more.
Good job on this story. I await the next chapter.

That's sad poor Moka and poor Tsukune

I can't believe you leave us hanging (I know...that's really bad...) like that!