Great story so far, can't wait for more:-)

I like this story a lot. I like the outsider's perspective you provide via Brooke. I like how you make Josh and Donna self-aware about what's going on between them, and what cannot go on between them. I like your protrayal of Joey Lucas. I like your writing style. I look forward to reading more!

I liked the Joey involvement and the descriptions of former girlfiends.

"I liked him until he did was he did." - "he did what he did".

Love it.
Love how she describes Mandy and Amy (personally I like Amy, not with Josh but I like her character, the same does not happen with Mandy)
Love that she talks with Joey, she's an amazing character

Love it
Raelly sweet

"When Josh is better, I must ask him to teach me how to be center of everyone's universe." - Hehehe.

Just caught up with this and am loving it. Really liking Brooke (and loving the fact Josh knows he loves Donna!)

So they have each delcared their love - what's next?

So sweet
Lovely chapter
Perfect

"I take time do so and see that shots were fired at the president and his daughter and everything is big, fat mess and that Josh Lyman is…" - "everything is a big, fat mess".

So sweet
Love it

Nice start, curious about the advice Brooke gives but nice to know they get together anyway. (Btw it is Miranda Santos not Mariah - you have used both)
Thanks for writing, looking forward to more.

"because I would have told her to work for Bartlet (I voted for him twice)" - I would give my eye teeth to have been able to vote for Jed Bartlet.
"Sam (what a cutie!)" - Yes, yum! I agree!

Lovely start - looking forward to reading more. Nice to know no matter what happens I'm going to get a happy ending. :-)