Hope you write the next chapter soon, this is really cool.

I seriously don't understand why this story has so many reviews. Freddy is SO out of character. He would never go through THIS much trouble to influence someone, especially the "lovey dovey" crap. Freddy is completely incapable of loving ANYONE. EVER. Not after what happened...

All in all, this story is out of place and corny, especially the fact that your OC sleeps like every couple of hours.

Explore your character! What was her past like, hell, what does she LOOK LIKE?! What does she like to do in her free time, how old is she, why does she have no friends? You get what I'm saying?

This is in pretty bad shape right now, but maybe if you draw it out and explain your meanings for things, ill feel differently.

Freddy's character isnt the usual but with the 3 chapters I actually like the ooc of Freddy ( not hugely but a good amount)

Hope you carry on with this fanfic as it is quite good

Mmm I cant see Freddy acting this way! He needs to be more sinister/scary/evil...etc. He seems too soft especially towards your OC! And Freddy isn't attractive! He's horribly burnt and would not give a crap about anyone! He uses people and kills them! That's his nature!

Freddy is out of character! He doesnt care or ever be gentle with anyone! He would have raped/killed your OC without a thought! He isn't attractive or sexy! He's a sadistic, murdering, cruel, evil man!

please write more

i am hooked! please update!

Why did Haley mention Nancy Thompson?In the remake,her last name was Hollbrook.

Please don't be afraid to use swear words. It's annoying to see the censor icon in the middle of words. Either include them and use them explicitly, or exclude them from the story altogether.

One chapter in and I'm already hooked.

Much to my surprise, the T-rated stories under ANoES fan fiction are more intense than the M-rated ones. This is gripping, thrilling, and just...addicting.

This story is great. OC's are usually annoying and weird, but not yours; I love her. PLEASE UPDATE.

I hope you will continue this story too. I want to see how Haley fits in to the movie's plot line? Will she be another student at Bedlam? And where are her parents? Did anyone else notice that Quinton, Nancy, and Kris came from single-parent homes? Update soon.

Love that your doing this right around Halloween cause I'm in the mood the read about older slasher movies :)
I think the story is great so far, but is their love true or is Freddy just gonna end up going psycho like he always does?

Do unspearable things please

A good start, looking forward to the next chapters :)