LOVED IT. I'd suggest using capitalization in your story summary. I know it's artsy but the poor grammar turns many people away.

This is really sweet and well writen. Good job.

This is exactly what I came to this site looking for after I watched that movie today. It was so posed and brilliant, and the simple but wild form structure was like a love poem gone raving; it was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all. You truly have a gift with words and breathtaking imagery. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. -ACP-

d'aawwww this was so precious x3 i love this one-shot, thank you so much for sharing it with us :D i loved reading it x3

Beautiful. Entirely beautiful. I love writing like this. It is so intimate.

I thought this was absolutely gorgeous - tender and mysterious and really really real.

The only one thing I can say is that Tarzan's eyes are green not blue! (And in the original books they are grey!) ;)

Also, I love that song you used. I'm *assuming* you know it from George of the Jungle, like me (though of course you might know if from elsewhere!) and it always made me think of Tarzan and Jane.

This is incredible.

Oh my gosh. So short but so deep. T.T Why aren't there more like this?!

Pretty! :)